very nice little map
Just plyed a round in it.
here is my small review:
-lighting:
you managed to create nice lighting with these yellowish textures, but a little to yellowish imo
still I think lighting could have been improved just a little, the overall brightness of the lighting is to bright. I mean the entire map is very bright. personally a small area around lightsources should be much more
brighter. that is already the case, I just think the contrast should be bigger
also the lighting in outside area could have been better, I saw no difference with the inside area.
score: 8
-architecture:
architecture and brushwork is impressive.
some brush shapes are little random imo, like the support beams in the pulsegun area. but besides that it looks very good.
score: 9
-gameplay:
gameplay is good. nice connectivity, visual connection between someareas, a lift jump
score: 8
atmosphere:
you have created an atmosphere which works out through the entire map.
yet I think it misses some final touches. right now all the rooms are a little to similar (in terms of atmosphere) , It would have been nice if you put some extra stuff in it.
like a broken pipe in one room. a plant in an other room. perhaps a giant machine in another which totally changes the appreance of a wall.
you did a good job on the sounds imo. every room has a nice different sound, i just think It would have been cool if you did that with arechitecture/deco a little more too.
examples of stuff you already did this with is the glass floor and the fence on the wall. these elements are the faces of these rooms. I think you did a good job but I would have liked to see more of that stuff.
I hope I explained my thoughts right
score: 7.5
overall score ( not avarage ): 8,5
(just pronounce it out loud and you will realize what I mean)