K, I'm not going to comment on your archi and lighting... There will be quite a lot to describe then.

.. and given you didn't work on visuals at all.
http://www.extremew00t.com/rules.html#w00t
Absolutely each w00t styled map has some sort of hazardous pit between the bases , it must be anything that can obviously kill players. At this point it cannot even be considered w00t map.
Flag placement - V1 has better flag placement - flag areas should be open so enemy could be gibbed easily. Also, make sure that you can capture the flag quickly, no more then 18 seconds, it is the w00t guideline.
Cheers
